Multumesc pentru aprecieri
Cat despre masura, cred ca intervine felul in care le citim, de exemplu "E un vis al omenirii , e un ideal al fiintei / Sa aiba parte de o astfel de trezire a constiintei" , masura este 8/8 (ca in Scrisoarea I), numai ca , daca ar fi recitata, ar fi "S-aiba parte", pentru ca acel "a" din "sa", se imbina cu urmatorul a
.Uneori, intervine si felul in care cuvintele pot fi accentuate (cum, de exemplu, la Eminescu apare versul "Ei vor aplauda desigur biografia subtire", tot in Scrisoarea 1).
Mai postez doua poezii, tot creatii proprii:
Revival
When nothing is certain, except only pain
Then something inside you reminds you your name
When hurt seems forever; you hear from inside
"……., remember: It's only a side"
The future awaits you, without you to know
It's always inside there, wherever you go;
The clouds may be able to cover the glow
But after the rain falls, shall come the rainbow
The sunset elapses; the day is now gone
The sun won't be shining...untill the next dawn
A star is collapsing, it's matter of time
Untill, from nebula, a new star will shine
The trees, in the autumn, might loose their own leaves
The nature, by next spring, new ones for it brings
The world could be frozen, and empty may be
Animals are surviving, so fishes in sea
The fight is within us; we were born this way
Having strenght and courage in our own DNA
When hopeless, or doubting, bear deep in your mind:
No matter how hard was, we won and survived!
If only see darkness, i want you to know
A sunshine can always turn it into glow
When feel disappointed and when you're in pain
Remember, ……: you'll shine once again!
Departare
E noapte, dar nu dorm, stand iarasi de veghe
Gandesc la distanta de-o mie de leghe
Ce sta, precum zidul sever din Berlin
Intre noi, si creeaza un vid mult prea plin
Citesc, pe-o hartie, a tale mesaje
In suflet, aievea, apar peisaje
Nu suntem departe, preabine o stiu
Dar cu tine acolo, as vrea azi sa fiu
Simt recea hartie pe-a mainii textura
Ajunsa-nauntru, devine caldura
Ce vis, ce miracol, ce metamorfoza:
Simti pura traire din doar celuloza
A talor silabe, citind le dau glas
Termin, insa ele in mine-au ramas
Iti mangai cuvintele inca o data
Si-apoi simt aievea ca-n piept prind sa bata
Nu pleci, esti in mine, oricat de departe
Am fi, caci distanta nu poate desparte
Decat materialul, ori nu spiritual......
...Si-a noastre inimi bat simultan
Gandesc la viitorul ce ne asteapta
Cu brate deschise, incheiand lupta dreapta
Ce astazi o ducem, si ce ne va duce
Catre fericire, din asta rascruce!
